Feedback on Pitch

From evaluating the feedback from our pitch we discovered that the strong areas of our potential music video were the concept of incorporating a performance within a narrative. This appeared to be a successful element of our pitch and would definately draw the attention of viewers. Furthermore, the proposed target audience was said to be very appropriate.
However, our weaknesses were apparent in the research for the location. This will have to benefit from our full attention in the next stage of producing the music video.