Feedback on Rough Cut

Feedback from Group 43

> We really like this video.

> Good variety of shots which fit with the genre well.

> Liked how you involve the public in the improvised scenes.

> Good amount of lip-syncing which goes well with the 'live' atmosphere.

Feedback from Group 44

> The genre work is brilliantly worked out. You know what your doing with the genre which many have struggled to cope with but you have managed to pull it off well.

> You really need to put more close ups, more work on lip syncing your shots and making sure you got more performance shots. At the moment it comes across a bit like a appraisal I mean the ideas of shots outside of performance works but I think you got a few too many on it but they're pretty funny. (Y)

> You have a few great shots but you just need to use them more. More performance!

> Your selling yourself well at your end shots with the walking out. Just more work on shots showing all of you each having a face close up would work splendid.

Feedback from Group 47

its cool! evreything done, need to do the end better but brill. i liked the footage, the angles, the story line, the genre link, the goodwins points used very well... i agree with most of what the other people say, the double at the end needs doing again because it doesn't look good doubled, i like the home footage feel to it, it adds a really nice feel to it. The song is well sycned to the artist singing and you give the artist a really clear and good chance to be seen.

Feedback from Group 45

> Overall your roughcut video worked well, however it seemed as if there were too many locations making it hard to follow, because of this it did not flow as well as we think it could have done. But once the editing process has been carried out this should be improved.

> The pace of the video reflects the pace of the song and fits in with genre conventions.
> There are lots of varied shots particularly long shots that can be seen however we think the video would benefit from a few more close ups to sell the artist.
Well done :)