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Feedback from Q2-38
Like the mood board gives us a good feel for the type of music video they are making.
The shots of possible locations is good because shows they are up to date with their work.
The in depth evaluation is very long, but informative.

Feedback from Q2-41
The only thing that we thought it would need is a few more visuals.We really liked the location planning and has inspired us to do something similar.

Feedback from T2-47
Good use of storyboard as it shows us your idea really well.
In storyboard, gave us a strong idea that there will close ups of the artists.
Really good background research looking at different bands for inspiration, adverts and relevant information.
Good idea of practice shots for your advert, noticing that the front man tends to be in the foreground.
To improve maybe you could add more pictures, so that there is an even amount of writing to pictures.
Possibly add a mood board of ideas.

Feedback from T2-45
Storyboard; couldn’t quite fully understand what it was describing.
Lots of images though not many of artists or description of the artists.
Loads of detailed background research with bold headings colours and good media terminology.

Feedback from T2-45
Storyboards are good and give a clear idea of what you will be filming and your shot types.
There is some good background research and good examples of videos that have influenced your own video.
The pictures of you as a group are good but you need to describe more with a bit of writing how you are going to dress in the actual music video.

Feedback from T2-44
It's nice to see somebody got a reply from the artist they're replicating for a music video.The way you have a lot of work but also a lot of pictures shows your enthusiasm and makes it very user friendly to read.
It's nice to see a lot of pictures used to demonstrate your inspiration.There are good links between the storyboard and the timeline and the shot list.There are also good research of other bands in the same genre for example Blink 182.

Feedback from T2-43
Like the research into the posters/digipack and the pictures which come with this.
Well illustrated along with the good research.
Was very informative and well written.
The storyboard explains in detail where your going to go and you used a lot of visuals with the text.Liked the short but sweet Auteur research and all the research you've put into rock bands. Concerning the contacting of the artist, impressive.


Those points shown in an italic font are the negative feedback posts which need consideration. Generally, from these feedbacks we can see that our main weakness's are;

1. Add more pictures
2. Add a spider diagram / mood board / format our initial ideas
3. Revise our storyboard and add further detail and understanding
4. Add description of costume to the digipack and our costumes in the actual music video